thewhiteguy1 Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 also one more thing, the "tips for may's............." should be white as well. also you have three different fonts. i would only use two different fonts. so maybe if you could find a font that could be used as the blown euroz title and the sweden's finest. otherwise great work minus the spelling of course :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TorqueSteer Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 What level of study is the class for? (high school, college, university, trade school etc.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drPheta Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Choose some cleaner fonts. Courier/typewriter style fonts really kill the appeal. Also, play with font sizes to draw the eye to certain articles advertised on the cover. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oreo931 Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 I think your bumper is cracked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBoy8 Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Courier/typewriter fonts are usually a big no no. Also, I think it'd look better if the two pictures on the bottom were the same size.Hrmmm... here is one I designed back in the day. Hope it'll help.Yes, it's based off the Car and Driver magazine but still! I had to imitate a popular magazine....... and I got a good grade on it . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelawareT5M Posted April 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 What level of study is the class for? (high school, college, university, trade school etc.)First level photography class for Temple UniversityI think your bumper is cracked.your bumper looks like i beat Rhianna with it, threw 30 bottles of mustard at it, the put it on your car.Courier/typewriter fonts are usually a big no no. Also, I think it'd look better if the two pictures on the bottom were the same size.Hrmmm... here is one I designed back in the day. Hope it'll help.Yes, it's based off the Car and Driver magazine but still! I had to imitate a popular magazine....... and I got a good grade on it .Thanks that does help, I did this in like 45 minutes ( I know it shows) but I'll just get up early and put a little more work into it with the suggestions everyone's given me.Being colorblind too doesn't help Thanks for the comments guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oreo931 Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 your bumper looks like i beat Rhianna with it, threw 30 bottles of mustard at it, the put it on your car. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jippi 855 GLT Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 not bad.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karlson Posted April 10, 2009 Report Share Posted April 10, 2009 Here's my version:cheers!ChrisThanks for filling-in holes under right head light, looks much better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prasamin Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 nice huge crack in your bumper! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TFIVEM Posted April 11, 2009 Report Share Posted April 11, 2009 Courier/typewriter fonts are usually a big no no. Also, I think it'd look better if the two pictures on the bottom were the same size.Hrmmm... here is one I designed back in the day. Hope it'll help.Yes, it's based off the Car and Driver magazine but still! I had to imitate a popular magazine....... and I got a good grade on it .what ever happened to will? owner of that 93 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grocery_Getter_96 Posted April 12, 2009 Report Share Posted April 12, 2009 Thats A Cheap Magazine! haha Looks Good! Keep Up The Good Work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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